Book Title: Storm
ISBN 9781465759443
Part of Series: No
Author: Nicole Stuart
Available at: Smashwords, Barnes and Noble, Kobo, Apple, Diesel, Baker-Taylor, Sony
Price: $3.99
Number of words (approximately): 48 210
Star Rating (of five): Four
Summary: An all-woman
tour grouping in the Australian Outback with leader Dan Brown the sole male are
trapped in a valley after a violent storm collapses a cliff across the
entrance. The group members learn to
like each other, then one of the women is bitten by a spider, and Dan and Vanessa
have to walk hundreds of kilometers across the storm-ravaged land to fetch
help.
Extract:
- As soon as there was enough light, Dan scouted for a
place to cross the stream, choosing the place where they could get over most
easily, then went to wake Vanessa. She
stretched painfully as she stood. Dan
saw with concern that she was showing some signs of strain.
“Are you feeling OK?” he asked.
“I’m fine. Just
a little stiff, and I could do with about twenty hours of sleep!” She smiled at him, wincing a little as she
stretched. “I’ve been sitting in an
office for the past six weeks, rushing to get my work completed before I
left. I haven’t been able to keep up my
exercise program. But I’ll be
fine!” She stood, and took a few
experimental steps, stretching her muscles.
“Let’s go!”
“I’ve checked where to go over the stream,” said
Dan. “It’s down that way, about fifty
meters. The stream is a bit wider there
as it goes around the bend, but it appears not to be so deep or
fast-flowing. It’s about twenty meters
wide there.” He led her along the bank
to the crossing place he had identified, then pointed out a bush to belay the
line. He climbed down the crumbling
bank, taking care not to slip into the water, then stepped into the water,
feeling for solid ground with his feet.
The bottom was rocky, but reasonably stable. He crossed over fairly easily, wading
thigh-deep through the water for the first section, then, near the bank, the
bottom suddenly dipped so that the water reached to his chest. He pushed through, feeling the strength of
the flow of water on his body threatening to push him off his feet, and reached
the opposite bank. He found a place to
climb out, scrabbling up the soft ground.
He walked a short distance up the stream, to the point where he had
planned to reach the bank, near an overhanging tree a short distance downstream
from the bend in the river, then held the line to support Vanessa as she
crossed. She stepped into the water,
feeling it tug strongly on her legs.
Balancing carefully, she walked across.
She was about five meters from Dan’s side when a tree trunk washed
around the bend, bearing down on her with frightening speed. Dan, watching for just such a danger, saw it
first.
“Move as quick as you can!” he shouted. He pulled on the rope, taking care not to
pull Vanessa over, but helping her overcome the drag of the water on her
legs. She was less than two meters from
the bank, up to her breasts in the water, when Dan saw that she would not make
it in time to escape the roots of the tree washing down the stream. If they hit her, she would certainly be
injured and probably dragged downstream, possibly even drowned! He leaped over to the overhanging tree next
to him, that he had been using as an anchor.
He reached for a stout branch with one hand, and, hanging from that
hand, extended his body over the bank, using his legs as a pivot. Vanessa saw his plan, and she jumped towards
him with all her strength. The water
took hold of her, but her attempt succeeded, and she came within range of Dan’s
arm. He looped his free arm around her
chest as she grabbed his shoulder and scooped Vanessa bodily out of the
water. She quickly lifted her legs high,
and the tree roots scraped along the bank where she had been standing a second
earlier, momentarily hooking on her boots, then moving past with inexorable
power downstream. Dan held her tight to
him for a few seconds in his relief, longer than he needed to, then swung his
body back towards the bank and set her carefully down. Vanessa stood, and assisted Dan to recover
his footing. -
Reviewer’s Comments:
Structure: The book
complies with the recommended format for an eBook, and reads well. The spelling, grammar and syntax are good,
and the use of language considered and pleasant.
Content: The book tells
of an interlude that changes the lives of five women and one man. It builds the characters well, and describes
the atmosphere of the Outback excellently.
Nicole Stuart has a knack of telling a believable story in a way that
holds the attention of the reader, and her understanding of the locations of
her books is clear. She is able to put
the reader there.
Reviewer’s Comments: Storm!
describes a part of the world that I know in a way that I found
delightful. Her characters are ordinary
people doing extraordinary things. I
became immersed in this story, feeling that I was there! I enjoyed the story, the book and the
experience.
Karin B
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